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The Emperor's Opal Review


By Akuf - Posted on 13 February 2009

Well let me start by saying the Tammy reminded me of an old girlfriend of mine who was into all the weird occult stuff. She even forced me to attend the psychic fair once. I was rather amused being surrounded by quacks for eight hours of my life but hey that is a different story.

Now, without getting into too much detail and spoilers on to the review...

Besides the fact that the book is full of Reveks (had to throw this in there).

I thoroughly enjoyed reading it (and I am not just saying that blackwalt!). I admit several times during the story I did chuckle, and thought well ok it is a fantasy novel. ** SPOILERS ** The one thing I found rather amusing was the fact stormblade wrote in the vampires have sex to reproduce. Now of course vampires don't exist (right?) and according to other lore vampires 'reproduce' by apotheosis but hey what do I know.

It is written in a 'spoken' manner, which I found interesting, I don't think I have ever read a book written in this fashion. I also, couldn't help but be reminded that the story is kind of a cross between the Elenium (quest for Bhelliom, by David Eddings). And the Highly overrated atrocious Davinci Code by the highly over rated Dan Brown (I still think Dan Brown should have lost that court case, but that is a different story).

Character development was decent, as there are only two main characters and the development was rather quick.
Story progression though is where it shines. ** SPOILERS ** I really wanted to punch Mr. Van Der Noost in the face several times over. And of course Orhal. Though of course the final chapter was probably catered to the female audience but we can't fault him for that. :)

The story was fun to read and it was also an easy read as well.

So that being said
Creativity 3.5/5
Entertainment value 4/5
Character development 3.5/5
Story progression 4/5

OVerall I would give

Good Job Stormblade.

MauriceRevek's picture

You see? I was right!! Revek's everywhere you look!

Ding Dong the witch is gone
Witch old Wich,
The Wicket Which
Ping Pong The Anal Retentive Witch is Gone!

Akuf's picture

I think you shouldn't let Rolly use Revek's computer.

Stormblade's picture

He can spell better than Revek.

Stormblade's picture

And I'll count the typos.

... I'm waiting ...

Akuf's picture

The writing is so much the problem. The proof reading is however, some of that stuff should have been caught by your proof readers. Just make sure it isn't Revek ;)

Akuf's picture

Chin up girl is reading it now.
At least when she comes here.

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